Advertising assessment: Learner response
Advertising assessment: Learner response 1) WWW: This is a massive step forward : a really impressive assesssment that should be higher than a C based on Q1 and Q2. You've clearly revised the material and written in depth and detail. Well done! EBI: You need to add consistency/stamina across the whole paper. In Q3 you lose your way and the second half of the essay feels like you're not sure on your point. You lack focus on the question too. Planning will help with this - it's essential for 20+ mark questions. When using theory, make sure you apply it to the text. A couple of time you mention Butler but not how her ideas are reflected in the product. 2) "Female desire – woman as active sexual agent, empowered sexuality (third-wave feminism, McRobbie). Arguably reflects a changing representation of women post-1980s." 3) I would rate my revision and preparation a 6. 4) For Question 1, I should have included things such as facial expressio...